Video rough cut

Here is the rough cut of our video. We played it to our classmates as well as our teacher to gather different feedback to enable us to improve it for a final cut.

'American Dream' Rough cut from Daniel Jeffery on Vimeo.

Here is the feedback from our classmates. We have taken into account that they have probably concentrated on the positives of our video to be nice. However, from all of the feedback that we retrieved, we came to the conclusion that the main improvements that needed to be made were the speed of certain clips needed to be quicker and some clips needed to be shorter in order to be more effective.